Wednesday, 23 March 2016

I was eating the gramma

we are learning to correct our punctuation and correcting our learning and making our writing more sense and putting commas in the right place in our writing.

Tuesday, 8 March 2016

Narrative 4

The runaway
One day a stupid little boy ran away from home the little boys name was called rangi, he had white hair just like an old man, he was 10 years old. He had two brothers one was called Currie and the other one was called Pepsi.
Rangi was the oldest, his brothers were 9 and 8 years old. Pepsi was 8 and Currie was 9, and Rangi always had to clean up after them. Rangi had, had it, with his family.  They never appreciated him, he always did the chores. So... When he had enough with his family he ran away and took all his clothes and his allowance money.  He found a little shack in a remote place called mount crazy town, he was scared but he was glad that he was not with his family any more.
Eventually Rangi got bored, so he went to find someone to play with, his name was Foxy, he had dark black eyes and scary white teeth, with bushy dark brown hair, who wore  a dark black coat that Rangi found very odd.  Rangi hesitantly asked. “Would you like to play with me?”  Foxy replied, “oh! Yes please i would love to play with you”  Together they trotted of to Foxy’s house quietly.  Upon arrival to foxy’s house, Rangi noticed that the place was filled with very odd and scary ornaments. “Aah….Foxy? Why are there so many heads in your house?”
“Do you want to play or what Rangi?!” Shouted Foxy. “Of course dweeb! By the way what are we going to play anyway?! Shouted back Rangi.
“Well... let’s play, Foxy eats Rangi! Rangi’s face dropped and he held onto his precious head, thinking “why did i leave home again? Saying out loud “AAhhh! NO THANKS WEIRD O!” Rangi ran as fast as he could away from the weird kid named foxy and the scary looking ornaments that were in the creepy house, before he became an ornament too.
While Rangi hid in the bushes away from the creepy town, he could only think of home, so he went back home and greatly appreciated his chores and family with his head still attached.
The problem is that Rangi was sick and tied of doing chores at home and not being appreciated.
He ran away from home.
Met a very creepy kid named Foxy who wanted to eat him.
The solution to these problems was Rangi should have thought about what he was doing first before running away.
Should not have gone to play with a weird looking kid.

Friday, 4 March 2016


This event will be happening on the April of the 7 on a Thursday we have been training for a big event we have been put into groups all the are training for the FIAFIA night so please come and in joy the night  

RIP Pricilla Tui we love you

At today's assembly we had a memorial service for Priscilla Tui. Priscilla was a nice and kind lady she always cheered the net ball team and she always loved her team. Priscilla had five kids named Rowana ,Rawen, Cruz , Olie , Ofill, she always loved her kids and we loved her beautiful video we loved how Priscilla and Mosi how they did their beautiful wedding dance. In loving memories Ptengland School
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Wednesday, 2 March 2016

maths 3

show and tell writing

1 She was so sad when she lost her dog. The little girl was so sad she cried like a water fountain when she lost her black curly dog with big beautiful light blue eyes and beautiful toe nails with sharp shiny teeth. 2 The cake was delicious. The cake was big and beautiful and scrumptious and it will make your mouth water so hard it won’t stop and the icing was sweet and scrumptious dark chocolate cake with m&ms with Maltesers. 3 The beautiful garden. The beautiful garden was beautiful blue daffodils and sweet flowers with a beautiful scent of vanilla and nice bright purple lavenders. 4 it was a stormy night The night was stormy the lightning was strike fast and hard on to the ground and there were people that were streaming loud like a gorilla the clouds were dark and spooky the cloud gathered to do a big lightning strike then the lighting made a fire in a remote island with only 20 human beings. 5 it was an exciting day The day was exciting everybody playing and running and all the kids were so excited they never wanted to stop and all of a sudden there were people that was setting up the fireworks so when they lit the fireworks all the kids were so excited the beautiful fireworks were lit up.