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Tuesday, 28 February 2017

TE TAIAO O TAMAKI - Thirst

Walt Analyse the text to understand the key themes and messages
 

TE TAIAO O TAMAKI Council Letter

Dear Council I am writing this letter to you saying that you should help the community clean and nourish the rivers, lakes, and also the creeks. Because we may have problems with our water supply that we are drinking. I have sent a letter because people have been littering around our area.

I have also been seeing that the rivers and lake are really dirty and that we need your help to clean up all this mess that the public area have been doing to our precious area.

Also I have been seeing that the area around the pools is really filthy and that we need to have a cleaning team because this small problem might turn into a major problem and that is all I have wanted to ask from you

Sincerely Moroni 

TE TAIAO O TAMAKI - Water worries task

Walt-find evidence to support my answer 
We have been learning how to find evidence so that it may support the answer that I am producing to my work. I have also been learning how to analyse the text that I have reading and to make my reading work make seance for my reader to read more easily.

Thursday, 16 February 2017

TE TAIAO O TAMAKI, Water wise poster

WALT - Plan for a  piece of explanation writing.
                  - Use the' Title-Introduction-Information-Conclusion (TIIC)
                       structure.
Today I have learnt ;a lot about why we need water one reason is to nourish the earth and also to stay alive.