conjunctions

WALT:  We are learning about conjunctions and how to use them in sentences.

• We went home and went straight to bed.

• They are rich but they aren’t happy.

• We went home because we were tired.

• We went home early, so we missed the end of the concert.

• We went home when Jane wanted to.

• We went home before the concert ended.

• We went home after Max Jones had sung his first song.

• We went home although / though we did not really want to.

• We will go home if we are tired.

Gene can go to school because he had to learn.

Lena has a sore foot when she was playing football.

Katareina wont be going to the movies unless she does her chose.

Sione can ride his bike only if he cleans up.

Sally climbed a tree but she broke her leg.

Kyle walked home from school since 2001.

Simon was full from dinner after he ate too much.

Anna watched her sister while she was playing rugby

Scott was in charge although he got ripped of and did not get payed.

Shelley played ripper rugby if listened to her parents

Today we have learned what conjunction and now know how to use the conjunction properly in our writing and we know what they are about in our class. In class we had to

figured out were to put the conjunction in the write place in the sentences and learned how to combined two sentence with a conjunction.

having a million dollars

walt write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words.

If I had a million Dollars at the Mall

Intro

If I was a millionaire I would by my own mansion. I would have a million dollars I think that if having a million dollars is cool because you would not have to look at the prices on the tag and you could just buy everything and have guards to protect me and a butler.

Toy world

I would buy four Nerf Gatling gun and get two mgp scooters and a Bmx bike. What I think about stuff is with a million dollars is that you can buy whatever you and buy a army electronic helicopter and put a two go pro cameras and the helicopter and the go pro would be waterproof and a car the same stuff that is on the helicopter. When I think about having the whole collection of the controlling army helicopters and army planes electronic and whole collection of nerf gun it is pretty cool.

Footlocker

If I had a million dollars I would go to foot lockers and by five pairs of Nikes and five pairs of adidas because I love my shoes. I would just make a collection of shoes and show of with them in my brothers face and go to footlockers and buy a` pair of rugby Nike boots to take too all of my games. When having a million dollars is pretty fancy and also i’ll just buy the footlockers so I can just go there and get shoes and other stuff as well because I love to shop. I would go to footlockers and by a pair of black high tops.

rebel sports

I would go to rebel sports because I love rebel sports because there is a lot of thing that involve rugby so like ill just go there and buy like rugby balls and new sprigs for my rugby shoes. Buy a new and improved  snooker table to play with and new swimming gear and buy the store. So nobody else can come and buy anything so everybody has to go to the next rebel sport and the store will be all mine. Mostly the one that I want in rebel sport is all of the skins that are my size to use in my games and tournament.

Conclusion

If I had a million dollars I would help out my family with the bills and buy a new house for the family and I would give my mum and dad hundred thousand dollars to them because I'm financially responsible. I would help out the homeless people and go to world vision and give them 400 hundred thousand dollars to help out the poor and give them fresh food and water and house because would want to help them out. If having a million dollars is actually cool but I would want to help my family’s out and give them 10’000 dollars because I love my family and I would do whatever  it takes to help them out in my life.

In my writing I was writing about having a million dollars in the mall and learning how to write jucie word in my paragraphs

Advice for games

Walt: find proof of the authors message. 

We were learning to interview people on video games and to give advice.

new born baby Mr wise man

        Walt: write a lead paragraph of a news report

                                 

 New born baby could

Moroni 2015

Last week Mr Wiseman had a baby girl and he is a year 7 8 teacher at Pt England.

Mr Wiseman had the baby last week and her name is Ailah, we are unsure of the spelling for her name. Mr Wiseman was not at school because he was looking after his baby.

today we were learning to write a report about a baby 

Anzac day

WALT:write a high quality paragraph about Anzac

For assembly on Friday we celebrated Anzac day for the people who fort  for us in new Zealand. That’s how we stood up to the remembrance. Did you know that  approximately 8,000 men left New Zealand in a day on ship’s.

Walt: task is to write about Anzac day

river talks

                                  WALT:: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Last week On Thursday my class went to Omaru creek .

Back in the days people used to play swim in it now it is ugly and dirty. So  can you help us keep our creek nice and tidy ?

DESCRIPTION:Today everybody had to write a introduction about our creek, using a simple sentence complex sentence and a question

 

     

crazy tasty flavoured chicken worms

Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation

Mr Goodwin said to our literacy class that have your teacher ever feed you chicken flavour worms?

Mr Goodwin said have  ever heard about wriggly worms

At the end we all were laughing hard and crazy .

Mr Goodwin ask us to do a simple sentence and complex sentence and another simple sentence.